Goals for Essay 1

Devin Andren

Marlen Harrison

College Writing

26 January 2009

Before Goals

Narrative and my audience is young adults (16 and up) and anyone older than that.

Introduction
-Get the reader’s attention
-Keep the reader’s wondering what makes her life a struggle
-keep introduction sort of going through the first two paragraphs

Story
-Name: Sydney Leigh Wallace
-Age: 18
-Major: Theater
-Problem/Conflict: her mom died

Conclusion
-About 2 paragraphs
-Follow the same format as introduction except in reverse
-Bring the paper full circle

Edit!!!

After

I loved doing this paper. I was able to really let loose and get lost in my own story. I do think that I have truly accomplished all of my goals during this paper. I must admit that I learned a lot about myself as a person while I was writing this. I liked the introduction and the conclusion and I do believe that I was able to bring my story full circle. No, it did not have any dialog, however it was still interesting and informative I believe.